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About Me Member Hack isnt-highschool16/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 5 Years
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Asashi Sushi Bar

If I Could.

Sun Feb 13, 2005, 7:21 PM
She stepped outside into the morning air
To watch the cars go by and let the sun dry her hair
I wanted to tell her how beautiful she was
But I just stared.

I sat behind the wheel and watched the raindrops
As they gathered on the windshield
And raced down into the humming motor
And she folded up her fears like paper airplanes
And lost them in the trees...

And I know I don't deserve this
The capacity to feel
To laugh and cry and to praise
For that I live and breathe and wake each day
Is nothing less than your grace
In an awkward and glorious movement.

-Mineral

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  • Current Residence: Maryland, United States
  • Favourite band or musician: Dylan
  • Favourite genre of music: it's whatever
  • Favourite poet or writer: J.D. Salinger
  • Favourite game: HALO!!!

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:iconanotherknifeinmyhand:
nice da keep up your artwork

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screw the press
and my life sucks
but i love sonny moore
and fromfirst to last.
:iconblissful-nightmares:
i just thought id come check out your main page.. *shrugs* something to do.. but im shocked to see your number of pageviews.. how is it that youve only got like.. 2oo more than me? Your poems whoop my poems asses!.. damn these people and their shallow interest in just visual art... "hehe.. if it looks pretty and i dont have to read any big complicated words ill comment!" ughs...

well.. thats about it...

Love Elizabeth

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, put this in your sig.
:iconxlostxinxwonderlandx:
wow. your poems are just wow... you seem so much older in your writeing that what your age really is.

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meow
:iconrxqu33n:
Thanks for the +Fav :smooch:

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..as soon as you came in, the a g o n y ...it went away...
:iconblissful-nightmares:
you've earned my respect and im curious as to what else may come in your writing :+devwatch:

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, put this in your sig.
:iconisnt-highschool:
Hey guys, I've edited "Picture", I added the ending, which was in the original, but I took out for dev. I put that in. And I've added some obscure little stories, and a non-fiction piece called "First Kiss". Enjoy.
:icontoxiccaelynn:
Hey...
Ok, Frannie is your sister.
Lindsay is mine.
Frannie & Lindsay are friends.
Frannie said I should say hi.
So....Hi!
:iconisnt-highschool:
Download my top 5 songs, because they own you.

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